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How to Write the Perfect Essay

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***FREE download of one of my successful Harvard essays: https://ivyadvise.com/p/welcome Writing the perfect essay is like drawing the perfect circle. Meaning that no matter what you do you'll always end up with a zero? No, meaning it's impossible, but with the right tools, you can get pretty darn close. You guys requested it, so I thought I'd share some of my best tips and tricks for writing essays. I've been writing essays for almost two decades now, so this video is a long one. Strap yourself in and get ready, 'cause this is about to be a ride. Also, the first essay format I give you comes from my French education on writing essays (i.e. start with a question, develop your ideas, answer the question, open essay up to new question). The second essay format I give you comes from my American education on writing essays (i.e. state a thesis, argue your thesis, restate your thesis). I'm partial to the French way of writing essays, because I think it makes more sense for life (i.e. you have a question you want to answer, you try to answer it, when you do you move on...). However, the American way of writing essays can be helpful for trying to argue a point. Write the way that you think will best suit you in your given circumstance! More Info on American Academic Essay Formatting: http://www.bucks.edu/media/bcccmedialibrary/pdf/FiveParagraphEssayOutlineJuly08_000.pdf Link to Successful Harvard Application Essay: https://youtu.be/S-b6rl7bl90 Outline for My Harvard Essay: Paragraph 1 - **Introduces question: Am I an oxymoron? **Introduces context: I am a product of my environment (unsaid: I am about to explain my environment). Paragraph 2 - **Develops idea of life as a contradiction: Contrast siblings' age with mine, contrast exposure to maturity with childish enthusiasm. Paragraph 3 - **Develops idea of life as a contradiction: The gap between the contrasts seems to close as I get older, but a different gap emerges--that between my normal school life and my art classes. Paragraph 4 - **Develops idea of life as a contradiction: Art class is my exploration of another side of life. Paragraph 5 - **Develops idea of life as a contradiction: This "other side of life" has inspired me create simply for my own pleasure. This mindset has seeped into other areas of my life. Paragraph 6 - **Develops idea of life as a contradiction: A dream of mine is to create a charter school--this dream stemmed from my exposure to academic life. Seemingly unrelated, art nonetheless has been crucial in helping me understand how to make that dream a reality. Paragraph 7 - **Summarizes essay: "My world consists of math books and track meets, it's the wonders of a painting class and the parenting of siblings..." **Answers question: Some might think my life is an oxymoron, I call it balanced. Woo almost finished! But because I'm a YouTuber and these words are ingrained in my DNA--don't forget to LIKE, COMMENT, and SUBSCRIBE. Support me: https://www.patreon.com/yesreneau Video Gear Used for This Video: **Camera - Canon t5i http://amzn.to/2dld16N ** Lens - Sigma 30mm f/1.4 http://amzn.to/2e3ccyx **Microphone - Rode VideoMic Pro http://amzn.to/2dld1Ur **Tripod - Manfrotto Compact http://amzn.to/2eeUG9O Music - "La, La, La" by Otis McDonald Stalk me - Twitter: https://twitter.com/yesreneau Tumblr: https://yesreneau.tumblr.com Insta: https://www.instagram.com/yesreneau/
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YesReneau (6 месяцев назад)
***FREE download of one of my successful Harvard essays: https://ivyadvise.com/p/welcome
JESSICA R U B I N (25 дней назад)
Love your essay!
Christopher King Jr (1 месяц назад)
You are funny
MetalHead Titian (1 месяц назад)
Thanks so much! I got a 100% on my essay! I actually got pushed up to honors class for English. Thanks for the help!
XXX GHOST (1 месяц назад)
I love your energy ...For real ... U have me hooked : )
_merpitscassandra_ (2 месяца назад)
YesReneau oi
Iamgachaցɾɑթҽ * (23 часа назад)
This really did help me I’m 12 and I need to get into orchard school
Jacob Frye (2 дня назад)
I used that example of one of your essays. It was extremely helpful and so was this video. School is hard especially with these essays, but you helped me out in every way. Got an A+ on the assignment, thank you so much and keep it up. GJ YesReneau. Congrats on 186k btw
Ashaz (4 дня назад)
Congratulations for getting into Harvard University(one of the best universities in the world)
Jacob Austin-Sides (6 дней назад)
Most animated and energetic person I've ever seen lol
S t r a n g e L o n g c a t (6 дней назад)
I am right on time yikes
Noelle Oof. (7 дней назад)
I have to write an essay about what I did over winter break👩🏾‍💻😰
Janna (10 дней назад)
actually for an essay you start with a strong point, then bury a weak one in the middle and then end it off with your strongest point <3
Draco GAMING (10 дней назад)
Practice does not make perfect hard work makes perfect
Zay Zay (12 дней назад)
4:50
Mihai-George Căpăţînă (13 дней назад)
YOU MAKE SOME SCARRY SH*T LOOK SO FUNNY ! I LOVE U
Zoe Yaceczko (16 дней назад)
so what happens to me is that i'll write an outline, and then in the middle of a body paragraph, when i've already made my point, i'll realize that another short point could be related. i incorporate it in the same paragraph and THEN realize there are more side points to make. by the time that happens, my mind gets so foggy and convoluted that i don't know what to do at that point. even when i go back to read it, i can't read it clearly because of how dazed i am. so that's my issue.
Danial Kakar (20 дней назад)
Can U help me in my Writing Skills as I can not go further than one or two sentences? I always stuck in my writing I don"t know what to write and how to write.
Adrian Pegues (22 дня назад)
this helped me soooo much that i made an 100 in english THANK YOU YESRENEAU
Ashle Lane (25 дней назад)
Thank you this helped me so much!!! Subbed
Denise Sturnes (27 дней назад)
Thank you!!! I am a 50+ community college student. This video is so helpful for me right now. I hope to see more videos like this from you. For my learning style, you are making it easier to understand and learn. I will follow your channel to help me obtain my AA. Degree :).
Surabhi Chavan (28 дней назад)
Hi! I'm an Indian student and I got rejected from Harvard (i had applied through the early action program). I am now scared to apply to other universities Cuz Im not sure what went wrong in my application to Harvard. My SAT score was average (1530) and I can't improve that now. But can you help me by reading my essay and telling me what went wrong? I really thought it was a good essay, I tried to be as honest as possible. If you help me here, i would be really grateful. Thanks ♥
Shaky Dolphin (1 месяц назад)
Excellent delivery. Thanks for posting.
PedRaM NG (1 месяц назад)
Amazing😂😂😂 thanks alot for the tips 😁🖐
Brittney Larsen (1 месяц назад)
I love the poster behind you where did you get it?
Zubayir H Kazi (1 месяц назад)
I read your Harvard essay it was so bad I don’t want wanna take this advice but I’m going to here it out anyway.
Christopher King Jr (1 месяц назад)
You are so funny
LadyD1979 (1 месяц назад)
Hard to have five paragraphs when you need to write 2000 words?
Dicas de Inglês da bel (1 месяц назад)
Greetings from Brazil! Your tips are awesome! 😊😊
Elijah Tempel (1 месяц назад)
apparently i cant essay
Pepino El Chingon Cuatro Viente (1 месяц назад)
You're pretty
John Doe (1 месяц назад)
It helped me a lot
Asfa Zainab (1 месяц назад)
Nice
Jungmin Yang (1 месяц назад)
last minute save!!!!!!
Noah Barefoot (1 месяц назад)
DONT HAVE A SISSY HANDSHAKE DONT HAVE A SISSY ESSAY
TheeOriginalLolo (1 месяц назад)
I feel like if Mindy from Drake and Josh had a YouTube channel, this is what it would be like. Love it 😂
M.L. Griesbaum (1 месяц назад)
Hi Yesreneau! I love watching all of your videos! I am currently in the 9th grade writing a few essays for my application into the Illinois Mathematics and Science Academy (a high school that starts sophomore year). I am looking at this school for the math opportunities and I am far from a stellar writer. The essays have to be between 300 to 500 words (SUPER short), and since they are so short I am having trouble trying to organize my thoughts?
Diego Gonzalez (1 месяц назад)
Thanks for this info ... It should be mandatory to teach how to write academic essays... (p.s. you're radiance is distracting :s)
Kesava Sastry (1 месяц назад)
honestly u r the best . i have secured 1st prize in essay writing with your tips
IsabelleEmerald (1 месяц назад)
I am writing an essay trying to make it into a great program for high school and I found this incredibly helpful please tell me your a language arts teacher. Thanks
Creative Savants (1 месяц назад)
Awesome video with great insight stay blessed😀
Lonnie Park (1 месяц назад)
why would people in America freak out at "thesis"? Do you live in a different country or what? But meh... GREAT Vid!
A_Wild _Jerry (1 месяц назад)
So if my first essay is like click bait, should my first word just be "BOOBS"??????? Jk lol
the gay tree (2 месяца назад)
love this vid
Lishi Yang (2 месяца назад)
Omg. I should find YesReneau earlier this summer. you are so so so helpful, and clear for what needs in an essay. Thank you so much!!
Турат Нурбеков (2 месяца назад)
Practice makes perfect !!!! This is the best!!!
Турат Нурбеков (2 месяца назад)
You are amazibg!!!
Savageproking 12 (2 месяца назад)
you didnt even give example of how to write a essay you only telling us all the step for doing essay
DANGIE GIRL (2 месяца назад)
Excellent!! you deserve more views :)
Matt Mith (2 месяца назад)
Damnit. Don't open your mouth that way at the start of the video, we have kids god damnit.
Razan Shbeib (2 месяца назад)
Lol 4:49 to 4:53
Noah Barefoot (1 месяц назад)
Razan Shbeib 5:10
Kasia L (2 месяца назад)
You kind of remind me of Spencer Hastings
Scarlet Rodriguez (2 месяца назад)
For the grammer task, just install Grammerly.
Sabrina S. Ryan (2 месяца назад)
You talk like you're mid yawn. I love it
Noor Aldrawy (2 месяца назад)
My teacher is super transitional. He always asks me to write in a formal, boring and objective style😤😤
Bright Benjamin4Nigeria. (2 месяца назад)
You got a unique voice and a perfect style. I'm impressed.
Richard Majece (2 месяца назад)
What about writing perfect essay, only source nerdymates is helpful. I like your channel. After the graduation from school it’s always curious to know where you will study and what education you will get. School is a huge amount of time when we can think about our future profession and find out our favourite subjects. And writing essays is really important in that case
Crazy Guy (2 месяца назад)
Hey! I mean WOW! You explained everything without being boring. Thank you so much for this video. It's literally gonna help. Love ya
MM (2 месяца назад)
Our school showed us this video for our essay project!!
Tanuj Sunnam (2 месяца назад)
Can I have your E-mail Address, to have a feedback on a sample of essays.
Duang Duang (2 месяца назад)
Always trying to find something for help at the last min....
Taylor Wow (2 месяца назад)
This is so helpful and true that is deserves a sub! Great job!
Jamal Ibrahim (3 месяца назад)
Very creative teaching and beautiful eyes
siddhant grover (3 месяца назад)
you are the worst
Eric Andrusca (3 месяца назад)
tell me about yourself...not your stupid essays please(great I feel like patting you on the back for going to school?? its amazing!!!!). So, hi! my name is Eric and I'm a Christian and a Conservative living in Romania(which is ironical because Romania has no right wing- they literally just elected the Socialist Party- so we are all screwed)
Eric Andrusca (3 месяца назад)
You helped me so much! I'm going to write an essay for harvard right now so that I get an A and then you will love me???!!!! She's so perty, you're actually more pretty than most girls I know....sort of ;p
SCENT STYLE (3 месяца назад)
Looohhooooove you! Boom!! So glad I found your channel!!!
go games android (3 месяца назад)
You are so cute Omg I crush on You. You are so beautiful and intelligent
Matthias Ilic (3 месяца назад)
U sound like that freestyle dance teacher
jaya devi (3 месяца назад)
''HAI I'M YES OR NO''😂😂😂
jaya devi (3 месяца назад)
+Shayneby Shaynebi 😒
Shayneby Shaynebi (3 месяца назад)
jaya devi YesRenau, I think
Mohanned Abdulaziz (3 месяца назад)
i read the essay. I dont know whats it about.
ashley nathaly mendez (3 месяца назад)
i legit have not started my essay and its due tomorrow, thanks for your help! also, can you make a video on productivity and how to stop procrastinating? thank you!
dinesh kumar (3 месяца назад)
U got beautiful eyes
Josie Smith (3 месяца назад)
you just encouraged me to finish my essay and stop procrastinating. thank you lol your personality and facts woke me up 🤩
Dayaneptoonia (3 месяца назад)
My only feeling about this video is... gratitude. I will thank you forever. :)
Olivia Keinänen (3 месяца назад)
I hope this will help me. I am from Finland and I have my English final test tomorrow.. and I am so stressed and nervous. Thank you for your advices and wish me luck! Greetings from Finland
Chargedcreeper23 Gaming (3 месяца назад)
I subscribed because your video helped me remember things I have been taught last year.
Chargedcreeper23 Gaming (3 месяца назад)
Why does every educational video use words I don’t know
Yoyo (3 месяца назад)
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Jessie Ouyang (4 месяца назад)
Do you have any eassy-helping book for improving writing? I just change my major in the university and there are so many writing that make me anxious about what can I do with this year courses. By the way, I really like you. Will keep subscribe you:))
Gina Arcona (4 месяца назад)
bless you
Diya Baraiya (4 месяца назад)
Thxxx......
East Side Cuber (4 месяца назад)
I love the background of your video! That poster looks awesome!
Nicholas Chensut (4 месяца назад)
Thank you so much!
Drew (5 месяцев назад)
My teacher said to start with the second strongest argument and end with your strongest argument.
jOr AdYn (5 месяцев назад)
Wow you actually make me feel happy to write something
Javier Santiago (5 месяцев назад)
I have not attended school in years and now I am getting ready to start college. However, I been very concerned with how I am going to do on the essays. This is very helpful. My teachers never explained writing essays the way you do. Very intelligent!
R6 Fierce (5 месяцев назад)
She'd be one of those super fun teachers
jackbombkid TgR (5 месяцев назад)
When you have your final exam tomorrow and you're watching this video... F++
Kalam Chillasi (5 месяцев назад)
Will you help me in writing essay
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Ell Mrali (5 месяцев назад)
Thank you very very much!!!! This really helped me.
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Takagame Aoi (5 месяцев назад)
Very helpful, thanks a lot
The Jolly DJ (6 месяцев назад)
Thanks! I really need this for my next school year!
Shiela Alonzo (6 месяцев назад)
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Smartwriterss 1 (6 месяцев назад)
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Rizkika Ramadhani (6 месяцев назад)
Wow. Thank you so much for making this amazing video...the way you told us about those tips was really inspiring haha..
Deepa Tanwar (6 месяцев назад)
Very bad speaking
Later (6 месяцев назад)
Use your weaknesses...to show your STRENGTHS!!!
Amy Fedelin (6 месяцев назад)
your recipe for the perfect essay is literally what they tell us to do in fifth grade.
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Antonia peters (7 месяцев назад)
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Dkdkdkdmfkrkfmroekd (7 месяцев назад)
I like the way you presented the video lol, but my teacher would be pulling his grey hairs. Essay styles are vastly different, but depending on the teacher, you need to adapt well on that aspect to achieve the grade. However, here's my technique on argumentative essay: Contextualization with a 1-2 sentence thesis to go along with it. Body paragraphs should strongly support the thesis, and not detour from it. Conclusion is restate the thesis, and tie everything back together into one full meaning. Normal essay: what you said lol

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